The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Joe Monday
Kristin longs to fulfill her inflation fantasy... and succeeds!
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

Really good, good content and would recommend to others.

benji dude
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

A well written story, not exactly my cup of tee but still pretty good, short and simple, well done. I look forward to more of your work, just make sure you format the stories corretly next time, unless of course that was just me?

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

More breasts implants story !!!! so good !!!!

Tate Mcleod
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Holy gazongas! I thoroughly enjoyed this story! The sequence is short though makes the most of brevity. Of the Acotto's Place classic style: premise,proof,punchline and all equally polished. Kudos!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Short, fun, cute

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