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The Overflowing Bra

The Marquis Moon
coimbreira@yahoo.com
Mina and Miranda - Some Spanish Helps
Some social commentary and some transalation to asist in the enjoyment of my recently posted story.
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Katarina
Overall= 2, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

I think you hit a bulsyele there fellas!

MerkavaIV
Overall= 5, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 5

Thanks very much. I fell more informed now. The Spanish will help me enjoy the sequals

Grayface
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 5

kewl deal.

MrHHH
Overall= 5, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 5

This makes me wonder if you're going to be the J.R. Tolkien of the BE comunity.

reader
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Where there ever be a continuation of this great story?

Technowolf
Overall= 5, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 5

Before I read this, the only thing I knew about Central American peoples is that they spoke Spanish.

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