If you found a crate of mammatropic unguent, what would you do with it?
Its been said that this story is the favorate of many, Indeed, I feel the same way. Never have I wanted a follow up so badly. Its a shame about Moon's disappearance from the site. Hopefully he will return.
My favorite story bar-none. It's been my favorite for years. Part of me really like the subtle indications at the end that the character Darby's body is changing and evolving to handle the formula. I have always wanted to see or write a continuation based on the concept of addiction and withdrawal. Darby becoming a slave to her desire, and likly a relatively dark end.
The characters were too young for me and as such I'm glad there was no sex. That said, I love the concept and the excitement of Darby. One of my favs.
The Snake in the empty bottle is the harshest of critics. I do not like anything or anybody. This particular story made me happy. Good Work! I think I like it. Thank-you.
overall, very nice, kinda lacked in the character development, seeing as all the friends that were pivotal at the beginning kind of fell off the face of the earth, but overall, a really nice story.
also, Growth and BE on a 7 year old?
oh well, still a good read.
Best story on this achieve
i wish you would write more :(
A cut above the usual.
No sex - not always a bad thing with underage characters
Lots of extra characters that didn't move the story along.
A little cliche, but overall a great story. Slow growth with a big bang at the end. And its always the best when people get carried away with BE.
Nice but scary that the girls were so young.
Great story, it would of been perfect except for the age of the girls. Way too young.
I love GTS/AP thrown in with the BE! Good descriptive scenes, but the characters were forgettable.
i loved how Darby got consumed with growing. I really enjoyed the story. I just wished you spent more time describing the process of growth in her body and breasts.
I have to agree with Mark. The characters were too young.
What would have changed in the story if they were 18+?
Very well written, good description and pacing; liked seeing GTS included with the BE; yeah, the age of the girls was off-putting. recipients email?
I am totaly into GTS and the only lack is in detailing the growth. very good!
Very good story. Age of characters was a bit strange. Thought it could use a little more fondling of "teh breasteses".
Didn't like the general age of the characters used; way too young IMO. And I agree that they were forgettable. Other than that, I found this story to be alright; though it seemed a bit too similar to the story 'Personal Growth' occassionally...
Well done. Great story details - I would have preferred older characters, but a very nice story.
Flarging great writing style. I seriously like the more-or-less first person style. Way to capture the teen-ish style!
Keep on writing.
Geeez'us, man this is one awesome story.
Nice work, dude. Keep'em comming!!!
Seemed very slow, but the grammar kept me reading till the end. The over all BE was fairly poor.
I enjoyed this one alot.. too bad it too a new upload description to guilt me into writing a new review n.n; I, personally, adore 'underage' characters whom are eager to grow. Preteen problems is another one of my favorites. My only complaint is the way in how it was very gradual and then quickly snowballed at the end. I would've liked to see a bit more of Darby playing up her new body and holding it over her sister/mom. Then again, I also would've liked to see the last glut and grow scene in a more one on one aspect or even Darby's self endulgence. When the other girls came along, the application of growth syrup soon seemed like a chore.. as did it seem the writer's description of all the events. Simply got too busy.
There's not enough good stories around that combine BE and giantess fetishes - please write more :)
Like others have said, though, the very under-age aspect made me rather uncomfortable.
Very very good. Slow, realistic BE, likeable characters & good quality writing.
Highly recommended!
An amusing story. And since she's still so young, I can imagine further growth spurts in her future as she finishes growing up the more old fashioned way.
The story is really fine.
Giantess up to 7-8 foot is fine for me, IMO too excessive giantess BE destroys the proportions to the related boy/man.Keep on writing good stories.
good story, characters a bit too young for me, but once out of mind very enjoyable. I like GTS i nthis range. Thanks for the story.
Good story. But I think certain aspects of the breast growth could be more focused. For instance, when the growing occurrs, an innovative technique some times used is growth associated with arousal or orgasm. As the female grows, so does her passion; perhaps she builds to a massive orgasm, or extended growth sets her into a perpetual orgasm that doesn't last until the growth is finished. That technique has always been arousing. Also, relating the breasts to various objects or sizes is always appreciated (especially when conventional numbers begin to become extreme). Overall, I liked the slow building growth. But as CLockwork said - it seemed to get too busy at the end, and the slow growth became a chore. A possible solution could be geometric growth - meaning that the more breast a woman has, the more she grows. This allows breast growth to be consistently noticeable, and makes it seem like she's growing even more (even though its proportionate growth). Outside of that, the age thing was a little weird, but as others have said, it was quickly forgotten. Thanks for writing the story.
Very Nice, but the characters were a little young for me. Whatever happened to the other two boys?