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The Overflowing Bra

Steam N Creme
Dream Girl Cum True
A guy's dream girl gets some dream curves and an itch that only he can scratch.
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 The_Hype
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
Not as good as his previous story, all our BE occurs off-camera, though the breasts are still lovingly described. Our revenge is short, sweet, and to the point, and a good read if you're just warming up for some BE stories. Not bad, but not as good as he can be, and practically off-topic here at TOB.
 Nickname
Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 5 
Eh.
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