A man suddenly finds he has the power to grant wishes.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.25
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.25
Madk
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Some BE, but not the focus of the stories
MrHHH
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
What a fun story! But it's more of a transformation story than a BE story.
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
A few grammer mistakes, but otherwise a very enjoyable story.
PeterBE
Overall= 4, BE= 1, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
A very enjoyable, well written story. Lots of fun, with good characters and imagination. No BE, but a good read and good transformations. Thanks!
Laughing Buddha
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Well put together. Very readable and enjoyable.
Pinto Bean
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Love your light-hearted writing style; I can't stand domination/rape stories. The ethical crisis the protagonist works through is fantastic.
The_Hype
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Fun to read!! The BE happens mostly behind the scenes, but this isn't just a oney, it's a twoey! This is a lot of good reading that manages to be erotic AND funny in good strokes, and most readers should enjoy it! Hope to see more from the Paladin
cmdr_mark@yahoo.com
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Always did like your stories.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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