The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

HorseRadish
Unknown
Strange Tales of Sex
Archeologist finds a strange sarcophagus, and a nipple hanging from the ceiling?
Average Scores:
 andiloves2heads
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5 
good story, could use some "fleshing out"
 MrHHH
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Great writing style, interesting situation, where's the rest of the story?
 MrNuclear
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4 
longer!
 Mephistofon
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 4 
It's a good story, the idea behind it is great but it's so short. More would make it easier to rate and suspect this could be a killer story.
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