The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

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Dotty Doolittle
Never eat golden wheat. A small story done in verse.
Average Scores:
 MrHHH
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4 
I love the fact that this is a BE story done in verse. It's not bad either!
 andrat2000
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 4 
Witty tale, but BE into an animal is not my deal.
 Bogrh
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
Very original and well done! It's nice to see something different involving BE.
 Nickname
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4 
Good story.
 MWPanther
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
This one is a classic. I saw this back on WrenSpot and loved it.
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