Brian finds an Altar at a construction site that endows him with strange powers.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.25
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 3.88
- Technical: 3.75
Bb47
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Good start, abrupt ending.
G-man
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
A fairly good story all-round; though IMO the sudden ending was a bit of a let down.
andrat2000
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
It could have lasted a bit longer. I mean the story ;-)
justal
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I originally wrote the story in two parts. I will have to dig in my archives and see if I can resurrect the missing second part. I will also see if I can find some of the other dozen or so stories I wrote many years ago. - Justal
Pinto Bean
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
This classic is one of the stories that got me hooked on the BE genre.
lynxx21
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I'd love to see the second part of this classic story.
Benji Dude
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
There's a second part?! Post it quickly!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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