The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Justal
Maybe next time
Now this qualifies for the code Weird.

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 Bb47
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
Weird shit. Ok 
 a real fan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
the very best i have ever writte read!!!
 befan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Interesting unusual story.  Very entertaining.
 Gray face
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5 
Yes it does.
 nickname
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3 
I think this one was a little too weird for me.
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