The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Sormin
Music Maker
A short story about a girl and her magic box. Her music box, not the other one.
Average Scores:
 G-man
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3 
Keep using the weird story codes, it's great!
 Anonymous
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
A fairly good story that came off as a little short.
 andrat2000
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 3 
I'm not a fan of short stories, but I read them anyhow.
 nickname
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
Short isn't so bad, unless the story is good enough to want more. :)
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