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The Overflowing Bra

The Chat Room Lesson
DD Red Shoes
Joanna impersonates her Step Mom in the work chat room. This pisses her off one too many times, and so Joanna finds a 'large' lesson is needing to be learned.
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 english 101
Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 2 
work on your grammar and spelling
 biggs
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
great story... there should be more like it
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