The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

DD_Red Shoes
The Cyclist, The Witch and The Boobs
Nearly running over a witches cow is one thing, not bothering to say sorry causes Sandra a growing concern. That is will she make it to the end of the race with her race top still on.
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Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 2

Alot of misspelled words, but, still a decent story. The lactation parts were pretty good.

JTS
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

It was ok

Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

I like the lactation, but it seemed very unusual that the main character's breast growth didn't go out of control, the 'Oops' factor adds alot in non-consensual stories. Oh well, the witch was stupid I guess.

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