Georgina has been battling weight problems since collage. A new diet plan works but she does not sustain it through the festive period. This results in some spectacular weight gain.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.00
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.00
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Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
The BE discriptions could've been better, but this was okay for a short story.
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