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The Overflowing Bra

Mark Henshaw
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Bj°rnten and the Dwarven Magician
Tongue-in-cheek tale of a dense Norse god and his battle with a dwarf. And, oh yeah, he gets some manly rewards at the end!
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Overall= 4, BE= 1, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
The story was entertaining, but severely lacking in BE.
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