please forgive me for this technical mistake this story is fixed version
Note: when you guys read this story try to put your self in the same setution this guy in
Average Scores:
- Overall: 2.86
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 3.00
- Technical: 2.71
Acumen
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Besides the fact that the descriptions themselves are only able to be considered weak at best, the author's use of grammar, spelling, syntax, etc makes this story unintelligible. I could barely survive the first page. I'm sure that with a stronger writing ability and a more clear writing style, this could be a great story, but this is not a recommendation for the serious and experienced reader.
xxxecil
Overall= 1, BE= 3, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
The writer's understanding of rudimentary physics and the English language are on shaky ground. You can't change Earth's rotation with just your muscles while standing on the surface; no matter how strong you were. All you could do is churn up the soil a bit. But the clumsy descriptions of size triple-Y boobs may titillate the non-discriminating reader.
Annon
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 1
This looks like it was written in another language, then they used babelfish or some computer program to translate it. it's very hard to read - i gave up after the second page. sorry.
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
this is the best if you understand it
Anonymous
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Same grammar, spelling, and concept problems as before. WTF?
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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