what happens when suzy meet her disteny , the story is full of wild thing just read and you shall see what i mean
Can I please have the last few minutes of my life back?
This is one of the only stories here that I feel deserve a '0' option for rating scores.
wow, that sucked, buy hooked on phonics or something
worst story ever read
To put it as the writer would...
"Having sucked is the story that this does, it vomit induces like U wouldnt believes me to."
You know it's bad when the description filed for the story has this many problems.
This rating system is broken. It needs to have a zero.
Hint: if one is unable to write properly long enough to do a story summary, and gets frustrated enough to end with words to the effect of 'just read it already', one is probably not ready to publish stories yet. More practice with the language would be a good thing.
Even I, who isn't a native English speaker, can write better than that. This file really sucks.
I'm sorry but this is one of the most poorly written stories I have ever read.
This story is horrible, the guy really needs to learn to use a spell and grammar checker, it's not even readable
I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.
THIS STORY SUCKS, HE NEEDS TO LEARN HOW TO SPEAK ENGLISH
This file- I won't deign to refer to it as a 'story'- was composed by an illiterate orangutan. I spent so much time trying to figure out what the sentences meant, I lost track of what was going on. Before you submit again, learn English.
Almost illegible. Spelling, grammar, logic errors abound.