The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

A giant lobster
Tricks on the beach
A pair of arrogant women are hounded by a mysterious trickster, one ends up making a lot of people very happy.
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 Anonymous
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4 
Well written but ended abrupty and overly cruel.
 Anonymous
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4 
I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.
 brestlover
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3 
Not bad, just not my style.  Love when breast grow and grow with nc from the girl, but needed to be longer and have more detail.
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