A story about a normal girl who gets involved in an expermint and well you know the rest of the story.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 2.20
- BE: 2.40
- Characters: 1.80
- Technical: 1.40
tstar
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
too mechanical,poor definitions.
Anonymous
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
When someone works hard appreceate it.
Anon
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 1
A good start, but the spelling and grammar leave a lot to be desired. The story was hard to read due to lack of punctuation, run-on sentences and improper use of homonyms (their/there/they're and its/it's/its' just to name a few). A good spelling and grammar check, and this story's quality would go up several notches.
IceOwl
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
A good effort, but leaves much to be desired. I suggest taking some lessons in grammar and spelling, and using the proper story codes. The description for the story sounds like you're bored with it. This is not a good indication that others will like it too.
Anonymous
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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