Megan, an adorable hipster, lost the love of her life, and found a lot of time on her hands. Â But since she started working at Dunkin Donuts, she's got a different life ahead of her. Â And some great new T and A, to boot.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.33
- BE: 2.67
- Characters: 4.33
- Technical: 4.33
Pergund
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wonderfull weight gain story, not usually my "piece of cake". This is a true donut fascination thriller...
Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.
Blake Isaac Gordon
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Not a bad story, a little unorganized, but not a bad story. I did enjoy the emotional metamorphosis Megan progressed through, yet it was a little hard to follow her thoughts. I have no idea if this was the author’s intention, but to me it held back the story some. If you looking for the standard BE story this an’t it. It’s more for the Feed-er types. I’d still say it was a good story, just needs a little more polishing and maybe just one more content proofread- but as far as I could tell only minor gramatical errors .
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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