My girlfriend told me she was going to go blonde for a sociology project, to record if people thought of her any differently. She got a little more than she bargained for, let's just say that. Did I mention that I am so much in love with her?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.67
- BE: 4.22
- Characters: 4.33
- Technical: 4.22
Amon
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
Good ideas; work on your pacing.
Sad girl
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Plz, if anyone knows where I can get this hairdye, let me know!!
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
My type of story :) Girls getting shorter, softer, and bustier ! great effort ! I prefer it when the transformations are not offstage, but hey, I'm not complaining :) Keep up the good work !
Whalebard
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I could really see the difference in Melissa.
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Nice! Keep up the good work.
Fegz
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
You could have given us a little more to work with in the BE description, but wow. Great job.
Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Melisia changed for the better
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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