Jennie had always wanted a larger bust. Any doubts about the Bust Inflator she'd been given for her Birthday would soon be put right!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 4.80
Johnny
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Loved the story in all aspects, would love a sequel or some sort of side offshoot with a friend or someone finding the pump.
Caelon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Loved every bit of it, the picture was a nice bonus. :)
Laenon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Absolutely loved it, the descriptions rocked. The duration of the inflation, and the almost against her will occurence. A+
Amandda
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Loved the story. The author sounds English though. Not that that is a bad thing. I like how they both were not in control. My B/F bought Isis and put it in my food for while. If only machines like this were true. Wowser. Thanks for a great read. Amandda
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
enjoyed very much!!!
Cool concept
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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