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The Overflowing Bra

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Birthday Surprise: The Bottle
A new take on the older BE story ""Birthday Surprise"" also tells of a girlfriend who surprises her boy with a magic potion on his birthday.
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 BB47
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Damn hot!  I want to be this guy!
 Blazer
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Amazing... I want so much more
 Some Guy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
This was one of the first BE stories I ever read, and it's definitely my all-time favorite.  Properly paced, highly erotic, and extremely well-written.  It's rare that a story dominated by a sex scene works so well, but it's been done here.  I only wish someone would make a sequel.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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