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The little girl who had a crush on him is grown...and wants to see what this new body of hers can do.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.22
- BE: 4.44
- Characters: 4.67
- Technical: 4.44
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is one of the best stories I've ever read. The premise is admittedly a bit scary if you think about it, but it's nevertheless arousing, and with the detail you've put into these characters you can feel that they got exactly what they wanted. Amazing work, well done!
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Not really into the mother thing, but it was great still!
Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
The BE is managed well. The premise is exciting! I look forward to the continuation.
Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Slow to develop, but well written. More intellectual than most BE stories :)
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.
revlarsyn
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I was enthralled, engaged and aroused.The characters were so convincing,and the details of the thoughts motives and actions show empathy and insight. A great story. Thankyou
Tenebrous
Overall= 2, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Positively frightening. There's a point where the eroticism is overshadowed and then crushed by the horror, and it's not really enjoyable after that point. It's a warning, of sorts -- be careful what you wish for.
LIO
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
anon#00001
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Not my ideal BE story but something different that was actually good despite being 'different'.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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