The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Steve Palmer
Unknown
Tennessee Institute of Technology and Science(Pictures)
"Every bust is potentially dangerous." Agent Louis A. Kerpalscheiker, FBGB
Average Scores:
 Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4 
excellent, a true love story! who is the girl in the pictures?! she's just awesome!
 Anonymous
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
The story seemed to go on forever with the same basic subplot. it never got any diffeent and that can lead to bordom.
 Anonymous
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 1 
Sparse, poorly written, poorly formatted- tough to slog through.
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