Big Tits, big nipples, big trouble.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.67
- BE: 3.78
- Characters: 3.67
- Technical: 4.33
TheFwank
Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
What a mess. I can't believe anyone would give this disjointed, rambling fap-fuel a 5 for anything.
Mrmanandu
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Well it is only half a story, and the paragraphs are there if you C+P it into Word. Spelling is let down a little and there isn't alot of growth description but the reaction to it (And everything else) is well written.
If the author finished this, it could be very, very good. Needs more growth and more description of it
Very Free
Overall= 1, BE= 3, Characters= 1, Technical= 5
This is only a story fragment with no conclusion, so therefore the reader has been put thru hell! If the enjoyment had a negative scale I'd rate it a negative 5.
I made a big mistake; I judged the value of the story by the number of downloads. With over 18,000 downloads, it would seem to be worth downloading, but I was wrong.
Sigley89
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
vrw
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Moi
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
D-Man
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
d
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
RORK
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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