The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

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Bill Gets Boobs
Never go against the wishes of your author, as Bill shows us in this comedic short story.
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 oscine
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
very funny, a change from the usual storyline (ironically)
 hargle
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
Brilliant. Simply brilliant. while there wasn't much BE, the story itself, and the author interaction was funny to the point that I almost burst out laughing, something I am desperatly trying to avoid doing in my current situation. hope to see more from you sometime!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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