The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Wokod
Yes Master !
Chris is a nice guy, but what happens when he ends up with a magical collar able to make him control and change any person wearing it, mind and body? Decisions, decisions!
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blank
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
power corrupts
ultimate power corrupts ultimately!
George42
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I loved it! I would absolutely love to see a continuation of this story, so much potential by adding the two sisters and the mother. 
RedGhost
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Not bad, I quite enjoyed it. Your two main characters had a good background, most of the supporting characters also weren't just wallflowers and contributed to the story in their own way and the transformation descriptions all fit nicely. Technical quality still needs some work with the grammar and spelling errors, but we know English is not your first language so I can still let it go I always end up fixing your stories anyway after I download them with a quick spelling and grammar check. I look forward to your next story submission.
Macho Matt
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I wouldn't put too much consideration into that previous negative comment. They're definitely a sadist. Just because you're not turning your characters inside out or punishing them with twisted tropes every other story doesn't mean you're doing anything wrong. The dictaphone is a testament to your wide variety of creative story telling. It sad that they feel the need to try to bring your style down. 
Simple Matt
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Truly a master of your craft. Love your story Big  small. Hope to see more like it. 
Madam Materia
Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
It's the same. You can pick up any Wokod story, and it's the same 34 plot points basically repeated ad infinitum to the point it's predictable. Guy will gain some ambiguous power over women, being afraid to use it OR girl wants big tits with little else in terms of character traits, and it's always a jealousy thing. A wish to be bisexual, if there's a man involved, specifically lesbian and only straight for him. It gets taken too far with tits growing to an obscene level in the last leg of the story. If it's what you like, then you'll find satisfaction in it on a carnal level I won't deny to some aspects, but unfortunately little else.

It has been three years, longer than I've been writing, and there's little to no improvement on a grammatical front. Things like mixing up fun and funny which change the meaning. There's also very easy to catch typos and errors like abvout and double spacing. When you get out of the turned on mindset, these errors start to pile up. Literally, I've found my mind filling in errors on its own in order to not notice them and try to keep enjoying the experience for the sake of hitting my climax. Not to mention the change in format from earlier stories with massive swaths of spacing and odd paragraph structure which seem to exist only to inflate the page count.

There is imagination in some of the concepts, the ideas, which is generally what brings me around to continuing to read Wokod's pieces. It's bogged down though by reading the same two characters with different coats of paint over and over again. You're allowed to enjoy it, obviously, for whatever reasons you choose. At this point though, it's a stagnation where it matters.
Astheriom
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Pure excellence.
Anonymoose
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
Absolutely amazing, I always eagerly await every new Wokod story!
a
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Just excellent. Your stories never disappoint!
IDKWho
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Its always a good day when Wokod posts a new story! Hot, heavy and just plain old fun! Like Nina, I'm left pleading for more!
Ace
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Excellent as always.
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