When an unnamed narrator meets Amanda, he is soon totally enchanted, but she is easily bored and it won't be long before he is just another ex.
This story contains some minor attribute theft and a fairly evil heroine. If you really didn't like Sisterly Love you might want to give this one a pass.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 4.75
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.75
Bb47
Overall= 3, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
For some reason, manshaming dominatrix doesnt do it for me. Otherwise, loved the expansion.
Greg
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Great ! Thanks for All your stories !
Sacha
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Great story. Really nice. You re writing quite a lot those last weeks good for us !
The mane difference with sisterly love, is that the character use a random character and not her own family. In sisterly love the poor little sister is aware of whats going on. It give a really tragic tone that a lot of people found not enjoyable.
I hope read more awesome story from you.
A graduate theft attribute story with an initially under developed and candid character like Kia s recovery or the wishing room would be tremendous.
SourMilk
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Hey codexdrinker! Glad to see that you've released another story so quick, I'll be sure to read it when I have free time. I came across your DeviantArt the other day, and I read and loved Priestess Katie. I was just wondering, do you have any plans to continue with that story? Perhaps having her grow more and more to superhumangodly levels like some of your other stories? I look forward to reading more of your work!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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