The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

codexdrinker
Shipwreck on Eden 2
While training to become an officer in the navy, Mei struggles with her conscious. Though her new pheromones give her the power to break anyone's will, it is her own will that is in danger. Will she be able to resist the temptation to enslave her fellow cadets?

No more BE in this one :(, but plenty of sex. Includes chapter 1. Comments and suggestions welcome.
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The Martian
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Love your work, keep the stories coming!
cman
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Unbelievably erotic and well written.  Can't wait to see what happens next!
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