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The Overflowing Bra

Shipwreck on Eden
When searching the galaxy for new worlds to expand humanity's fragile empire and ward off an alien threat, a small survey crew comes across a planet which is nearly perfect. They name the planet Eden for its rich vegetation, but soon realize that the entire biosphere is poison.

After disaster strikes the poison planet may kill them unless Mei Lan, the ship's doctor, makes a choice which threatens to unearth a fetish she has kept long buried.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very good flow, drags on a bit, but it logically follows. I love the domination without direct sex too.
Roid Abuser
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Not remotely my thing, but it is a wellwritten story for those who like this kind of tale.
not a color
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Liked it, although I thought the dominate men with her sexuality would have been even better by controlling the libido, orgasm and so on making them very horny, with blue balls unable to cum and so on.rnOn the other hand it would not have allowed to slip the control gradually over time so easily. rnLike to read a sequel.
Rols Garten
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Overall I enjoyed this story, Though it was a little light on the descriptions for the BE element not that I'm one to talk and the final part dragged a bit and then just seemed to end a bit abruptly. I liked the main character, found her sexy, and wanted to see more of her after she joined the officer's corps or maybe even becoming the kinky empress of the galaxy. On the other hand the supporting cast was a bit interchangeable and I had trouble remembering which was which. I would enjoy seeing more from you and more of this universe. 
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