The Girls enjoy their changes. Milk production increases. Phil buys a new house. Clara lets the girls try out her new addition. Phil visits an island of Amazons who need servicing. Cindy gets a taste of what Danni is hooked on.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.83
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 4.50
MadMacs2010
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
A "ripping good yarn" as they say, very well written, plot and character developement have been very interesting. I love the belly business it's very erotic. Only two critisisms, 1 I would like to see a bit more BE on the girls (he could make them all huge in the house but shrink to "normal" sizes when they go of the premises). 2 on a technical note, you need to keep an eye on who is doing what to whom, near the start of this section you said that Kim let him suckle and then a moment later the other girl said that Kim would be home soon, there were other instances throughout this episode and unfortunately they stuck out like sore nipples compared to the rest of your high quality of work. Keep it up! (and the writing fnar! fnar!)
Chaos Master
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I LOVE this series, keep up the amazing work!! If Becky wants a baby so bad, maybe Phil could approach her with the un-birthing thing and see what she thinks about it? Please at least THINK about writing and posting the "Packers" meeting soon. I can hardly wait for it, and want to see what they will do when they discover his one-size-fits-all dick. I do not know if you ever considered but if they find a good candidate, they could have Loretta change someone into either a pony-girl, a centaur (juust an idea?) or a horse that retains a human level of intelect. (That last one could not only give joy to the three girls who like to ride but could also earn some money through the occasional horse race? Though probably hard to weave into the plot, huh??)again keep up the GREAT, AMAZING and TOUCHING WORK!!
"Without Chaos, there is no Order"
Vampirate
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This story is amazing...
I'm literally running the possibilities when Loretta joins in the mix, and its keeping my imagination reeling!
Please please keep it up!
(Oh, and how about milk or cum bath in the new pool. I can imagine them filling it!)
Daemon
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Very well written with plenty of spins and kinks. I would love to see this series continued!
Lord Hill
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Absolutely amazing. Please don't stop writing these. I've really enjoyed them and can't wait to read about what they will get up to next.
doodiedoo
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I'm really really enjoying this series! The action starts off pretty slow in the first few chapters, but by now it's zooming! My only issue was the dream sequence - on its own it's fine, but when reading all the chapters in sequence it takes the reader out of the action and into a new setting very suddenly. Not that the content is poorly written, it just didn't flow in the whole story.
Very interested to read what's next!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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