Well, This is my first contribution after years of lurking. Thanks to everyone that helped with the proof reading. What diabolical plans does the magical mirror and it's inhabitant Luferra have for our main character? What revenge does our main character have in store for the bitch that wronged her? I have a feeling that there will be a lot of BE, AG, and even some pussy expansion. Please comment as you see fit. I will try and take comments to heart and shift future stories.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.64
- BE: 4.27
- Characters: 4.18
- Technical: 4.00
woodyharl09
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
this is one of the best wank storys ive found so far keep up the good work.
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
A very different and enjoyable story.
wuff
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
You hit on one of my favorite themes. Loved the stretching and hope to see her need even more stretching and bigger toys and fists.
castor
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
I would definitely like to read more. I really ejoyed the pussy growth.
Sia
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
i like the story and the way it is taking
banditkings
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
i love the magical part,but i have a darker side for revenge. heres an idea, the more he an she cums, the larger she get,s and she needs bigger and bigger toys so she can cum.
Fox Drifter
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
I liked it, even though I don't usually go for the revenge stories. You get a lot of bonus points for the pussy expansion; that's very tough to find, and a personal favorite!
A few grammatical mishaps aside, you DID randomly switch 'Mike' to 'Matt' and then back again on the third page for a bit. Not a big deal, just keep an eye out for it in any (hopeful!) sequels.
Starr
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
very good story, I hope to see a second
Cumbersome
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really, really, want to see what the true effects of this potion are.
baen
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Love it. More vag inflation please.
Anon
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Very good keep it coming.
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