The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Alien Research Chapters 5 thru 8
Average Scores:

Roid Abuser
Overall= 3, BE= 1, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

This was OK. I did like the fact he granted the bartender a large penis, made him likeable.

Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

You have me waiting too long. Excellent development of the characters, I find myself caring what happens. i simply cannot wait until the subsequent chapters are released. Too frequently are stories in this genre just plowed through. This series is a welcome arrival. MORE PLEASE!

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

great story so far could do with more b e waiting on next chapters

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great story. Can't wait for more installments.

Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Almost no BE but i still need part 9 - 12!

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Not much BE, like the others said, but the PE makes up for it! I can't wait to read more. I hope things start to move a little faster.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

So far you have me hooked can't wait to read more

Chaos Master
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

First, I LOVE this story so far but, I somewhat agree with Glenn in that there is not much BE in this part. Maybe with Danni starting to lactate there will be more in the next portion? We should also remember that Phil is just starting with his fantasy research, he MIGHT get more extreme as time goes on.Please keep up this story, I love it when it features a good man with morals that gains almighty powers.

Overall= 3, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

It's well-written, but I don't think it's geared towards the audience on this website. BE was once again offstage and extremely minor at that.

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