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The Overflowing Bra

XXXecil
xxxecil@hotmail.com
Faeophoba: Breasts of the Magi
 Vince's lust for a special cheerleader leads to a series of misguided magical wishes. The students of Madison University must contend with an elven porn-star, a Professor a bit too popular with her students, and a Goddess made flesh. Only those that download this massive tale will experience the busty climax.
Average Scores:

Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 3

Impeccable BE descriptions. Hoping you'll tell us in the future what happened to Vince!

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Very good

MrHHH
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Oh boy. A TG story with a touch of BE. Yuck.

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.

mR. little
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Diddo

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

DUDE!

Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Overall a good story that fits in well with the Faeophobia series.

NoTracesBackToMe
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This ruled, bit of an odd ending and it might be an aquired taste but thats what the codes are for, go read the rest of XXXecil, stuff it changes in quality but its the best stuff on the site.

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