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Average Scores:
- Overall: 2.00
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
DrakeDouay
Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Shoulda been a couple of pages of huge breasted lesbian action.The characters and the "world" were alive and the author didn't even look look like they were trying hard,which is always good.
The amplified lust 'thing' was conveyed very well. Excellent BE description.Shoulda been more details on the BE,though.
Technically,Very well written.The Sex-Slave stuff isn't my thing y'see.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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