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Patricia is in need for something interesting in her life. She tries out a special moisterising creme but unknown to her she is also trying out some special pills. She gets worried when she balloons over DD size.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.25
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.00
Very Free
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 1
Nice cheery story, with a decent conclusion (something missing in many others), but the poor grammar and punctuation are my main complaints.
Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.
Joe
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Dd, I think you did a good job you were fast and to the point when it came to your story
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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