The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Kingdom Come
Unknown
Alexandra the Great
Alex discovers that growing her mind brings similar physical benefits.
Average Scores:

GrowthFan
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

Overall well-written.

anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Make a sequel to it, tell us what happens to them!

Stretch
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

One of my favorite stories. The only dissapointment is that it ended just when it really got started. Wonderfull work!

BEMASTER
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Great job

Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 2

I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.

Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

Lack of reasonable explanation makes it loose a little of its potential.

dlurie
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

fortinbras
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

nc

Wagman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

I love the overwhelming of girls growing larget than their former supiriors.

Nobody special
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

This story definitely needs a second edition. I don't think an explanation is necessarily needed for why they're growing, but we need to get a better sense for it, and if you're gonna do a giant couple story, give us some time with them as giants! If you're going to go into detail with her as an amazon, give us some time with her as an amazon. As usual, formatting, spelling and grammar should be looked at. The protagonist, with her brain, would not approve!

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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