The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Grimmy
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The Tinderbox
First attempt, be kind. Debbie buys a Tinderbox at a local store and unlocks it secrets!
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Above Ground Swimming Pool�����
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

I would add something else, of course, but in fact almost everything is mentioned!...

spurt
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

great start!

IceOwl
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Excellent story, when do we get to see part two?

DOOMSTER
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

It was a really good story

Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.

pivokrtek
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

I'd reall like to read the 2nd part and other stories of this author

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