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The Overflowing Bra

Greapos
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Hell Hath No Fury: An Eclipse Vignette
A man, down on his luck, finds himself in the crushing, loving embrace of his vengeful ex-wife.
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 Dr. G
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5 
Bit too short for my liking, but still, expert work from Greaps. Would love it if he wrote a good 10-20 of these and tied them together in a cohesive universe where the world is more aware of how the virus is being used.
 Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3 
Creepy, but cool!
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