The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Kyle Shank
Unknown
Big Little Sis
A teenage boy tells about his younger sister and her amazing development into a teenage amazon.
Average Scores:
 anon
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4 
very good story, less (description) is sometimes more. 
to short maybe. but still good.
 hr
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
Need to wright more.
 Joe Schmoe
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4 
Not a whole lot to say here.
 elbaso
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4 
A little short, and no sex at all, but still fun.
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