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Tired of being underdeveloped, Melissa Swensen, a junior at Bulwer Elevester University, develops some nanobots to improve her. They turn out to work well...too well, even: she never expected to end up with such large breasts.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.80
- BE: 4.60
- Characters: 4.60
- Technical: 4.80
Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
These two Melissa stories remain my favorite on the website.
Please consider putting Melissa 4.0 here.
Sir Thomas More
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
One of my favorite stories, well done!
ProfessorGrow
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
One of my favorite stories here. Please write more in this vein!
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
annoymous
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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