TheClause2007@yahoo.com
A married couple decides to travel to a remote island for their anniversary. Susan, becomes addicted a mystical island fruit which has aphrodisiac effects. Her sex drive increases as she eats more fruit and so does her body.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.43
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.14
reader
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Very repetitive. The premise was intriguing enough, but the plot did not develop at all. Literally the same series of events happened several days in a row. Even the use of language and descriptions were repetitive.
flies
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Definitely a classic. An all time favorite.
b
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Stretch
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Definate growth classic! The situations are kinky, bizzare, and wonderfully sexy! I have got to get my girlfriend some of that fruit....
Gibbo
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
PringlesMan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
One of my, in not my, favorite story.
Quikerklik
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
A great story, with a dynamic premise
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