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The Overflowing Bra

The Tycoon
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Katy
Katy is a story I wrote ages ago. Hope you like it. Please tell me what you think. 

The Tycoon
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Tirithedain
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I enjoed it, made a few corrections while I was reading but it's all good.
Are you ever going to tell us about Amanda? :P

Very Free
Overall= 1, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 1

Short story, only a page or two. It might have been enjoyable if it weren't for the same spelling and punctuation errors repeated over and over. If I had known this before downloading, I wouldn't have.

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