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The Overflowing Bra

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Tales From the Bra: Second
Dementia's breasts sloshed violently as a dozen men rushed to her nipples, all of them stealing a grope as they filled their mugs.  "I'm a human beer cow!" thought Dementia.  
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Overall= 1, BE= 4, Characters= 1, Technical= 3

terrible ending a sick twist one of the worst ive ever read!

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