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The Overflowing Bra

oxomox
Angies Experiment At College
Angie and her roommate try a gimmick to make Angies boobs bigger, but mechanical difficulties ensue.
Average Scores:
 k
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
the background made it very difficult to read
 The Toymaker
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
I enjoyed this story immensely- Angie's relentless drive to find a quick fix and her erstwhile companion's shrugging acceptance of it all coupled with the BE itself make for a very good read. Bravo.
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