The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Rapscalion
Unknown
Personal Growth
Allison and her friends try to grow bigger breasts by using bovine growth hormone. They must of missed the "Effects may vary" label!
Average Scores:

Anonymous
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 4

Although the story is interesting and hot to an extent, much of it is overshadowed by the fact that the protagonist is exposed as selfish, immature, and power-hungry. She is easily the least likeable character of the story.

Anon
Overall= 2, BE= 5, Characters= 2, Technical= 5

The protag's sheer unlikeability kinda eclipses the story as a whole.

not gay
Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

aw comeon.. the ending is, from my point, sad. She gets no difficulties, is 11 ft tall! I think life should catch up to her sooner or later, maybe in your next stories, her parrents run out of cash, or she gets arrested for attempting stuff.. be realistic(ish) kayz?

G-Unit
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This is one, I consider a classic...

ghhg
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

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Hunter S. Creek
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Well written, engaging theme and characterization, well paced, and easy to read. One of my favorite FMG/BE stories.

Duggeh
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Although not critically the finest work here, this story is definately one of my all time personal favourites.

anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

best gts/be story ive read

boobmonkey
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

fantastic! Slow growth, but good time leaps keep it all going. one of my absolute favourites

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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This is the best story I've ever read! Theres no story like no other like this

Dave
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

An excellent piece that presents the reader with an interesting array of characters. The descriptions were well done, and I felt that the only thing that could help this story was to make it a little longer, or to add a sequil. The plot is seemingly well thought out, and I couldn't find a single gramatical error, although that can be overlooked even if there are a few. While I've never given a perfect score, this is as close as it's going to get. Fantastic work.

MrHHH
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

The best GTS and BE story that I know of!

Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

A great story with excellent attention to detail all-round, though some side-stories seemed a little irrelevant in relation to the main plot.

lochbois_l
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

the best growing story I've never read.

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