The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Axolotl
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Keeping Up With The Joneses, 2-11
The final 10 chapters.
Average Scores:
 bigbakunyuu
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Your writing is fantastic, and so are your characters. I am very much smitten with little Panda. It seems you don't write anymore, but if you ever decide to start again, I'd love a sequel of sorts.
 Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Simply put, this story was great! For some reason, it felt like I was watching a show on BBC. Eirlys is my favorite; I know it sounds weird, but I like me a hairy girl with big tits!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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