TheClause2007@yahoo.com
The moral of this story is: Don't accept free mystical brooches from strangers wearing hats.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 1.00
- BE: 1.00
- Characters: 1.00
- Technical: 1.00
Dinner
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
What in the world happened with your text format? There aren't any paragraphs, and I can't even figure out which end is up. I'm sorry, but illegibility gives all four facets of this fic 1 out of 5--if your reader can't read the story, then how's she supposed to figure out what it's saying?
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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