The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Jen Boobs
Becoming Jen Becoming Chloe
A BE-obsessed writer writes her own expansion story, starring herself, hoping it might come true if she hits "upload".
Average Scores:

Svin
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very good work! I hope there is a chapter two coming.
xmare
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
One of the best stories on here  it's so juicy with potential for more.
OdysseusII
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really enjoyed it, though it felt like it ended pretty abruptly, and I wish there was some more elaboration on her figuring out her new life and enjoying her fantasies
AC
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Fantastic, really excellent. Only quibble is that all of the growth is implied, as opposed to onscreen, but everything else about the descriptions of Jen's massive new tits is incredible.
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Well this story was a surprise treat! It is so incredibly wellwritten. I always enjoy a story that highlights the true struggle that such oversized endowments would cause, and this pushed very single button in the best way. Is this a oneoff, or is there a chance for more?
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