Darren and Olivia try to get used to her slutty new tendencies, but then she gets Slut Screened again...
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.50
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 3.33
- Technical: 3.67
Nickname
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Love the back and forth awareness of the female character
Seriously
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Had no errors opening it when it was first uploaded, story is great and some of the best stuff the author has written, which is saying a lot.
Myzery
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Seems like the 1 page error is fixed. Great story so far. Love it
Oarrhocks
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Ive downloaded it 3 times at the download size is 59 kb and only get one page. What size is your download with 12 pages?
Fidget
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
This is the author can anyone else confirm this? When I redownload it, I get the entire story, which should be a 12page pdf.
Oarrhocks
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
It seems that only the first page was uploaded.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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